Live your dreams.

From these 6 interesting lines (it is one sentence actually, but do you know why it became 6 instead?), here's what a friend wrote:

"To put things in adolescent view, one will grin at the end of the poem. Pure bliss shouldn’t be ignored. According to Aristotle, pleasure is something that perfects an activity. I deduce that the poem’s duality reflects on our lives, both the pleasure of seeking and losing oneself in love persona.

Contrary to popular belief, pure lasting love would last forever. But the poet has brought upon an interesting fact that one who longs for love very frequently, one who indulges in mindless love or surrendering himself to desires would not retain love long, for he/she has lost the meaning of love.

Trickling motion physically simply stands for erectile dysfunction. However, it can reflect on the rate how some of us realised how some potential love relation could or would turn out. Moreover, it does portray a certain fragile feeling through the usage of ‘softness’. More than just not being tardy and hardy, it can also insinuate how soft we are to the emergence of love when we feel it. It seems that the poet would like to note that we’re humans after all despite how strong or persistent we are to the idea of bad love.

A tongue and cheek take on love, the poem has its truth in today’s society where promiscuity has lead on the deteriorating meaning of ‘pure lasting love."


And with this,
Thank You, my Friend
For affirming what I really have
interest and passion for

Cause, dreams keep me alive
nearer to where i belong and who i truly am...

and stronger than before.